TommyNom's Reviews

[Webcamoose!]

Excellent, great work! ^-^

I loved it, great animation.
Especially liked my brothers cameo appearance.
I'll be looking forward to more of your animations in the near future. (Hopefully)

BritishMoose responds:

Thanks for checking out my stuff, I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^

[The Fishes]

You need to put more thought into your animation

Heads moving around and around from a full on front is not really good, perhaps make some fbf movements of the head, anything its really just all tweened movement which is kind of rubbish. Also, I didn't know they were fishes at first, perhaps draw them better okay?

[Dead Quest 3]

Its pretty nicely animated and drawned.

However, it lacked point and storyline. If you add these two it can become a good movie and please have some voice acting or something.

[µy v.1.2]

Wait what?

What was the objective of this game?
I was confused by the actual purpose of this game, and the interface made no sense.

[Tech Pong v1]

Right, few things need adding.

1) Some different music or a mute button.
2) More backgrounds and possibly a drawn wall.
3) Better drawn.
4) Power ups and stuff to make the game more fun.

Other then that, you got the right idea on the action scripting side.

[Intermediate Flash Tut. 4]

Woot hell yeah!

I'm glad to see people taking my advice, (from your last tutorial) dude this tutorial is really good now, only suggestion I reccomened now is making the flash clearer, some people might not know what the onion skinning button is (lol noobs) so just make it a lil more clearer for them. Other then that, excellent work, better then your last tutorial.

Musee responds:

Well, uh... Look at the title,'INTERMEDIATE Flash Tutorial,'.
It's not really made for their standard, anyway I thought that if you watched my tutorial you would have already known about FBF, but I was just sharing some techniques of my own.